Flash Fiction - 5
With all the Ammani-related comments for my previous attempt at flash fiction, I couldn't resist attempting a quick tale a la Ammani. So here I go...
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Caring
Her father-in-law was coughing as he lay on the bed thirsty. Her mother-in-law was tired as she cooked alone in the kitchen. Her son was waiting so she could help him with his homework. She sat in the living room crying. The mother-in-law in Metti Oli was so cruel.
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thinkers since May 11, 2005
15 Comments:
Good one man.....the Ammani virus is spreading faster than email viruses.
Thanx 4 Blogrolling me.
Hehehehe.. so typical.. so true..so short
World over, non-serial watcher's 'emotion' about the serial lovers, has been 'more than adequately' expressed....wonderfully so...
(m-i-l in kitchen dhaan konjam udhaikudhe ;) - may you be gang up the m-i-l and d-i-l ?)
ippo than metti oli kitta irunda nanga (anti serial ppl) vidupatirukom, neenga ippo ada patthi pesanama? anda pera sonnala nan angarundu escape!!
kaps, thanx!
zero, thanx for pointing that out... fixed it.
ioiio, thanx :)
arvind, all for some effect :)
srivatsan, LOL
bj, nice one...i dont think i can ever write flash fiction which seems to be art in itself...coz i usually need time and space to write something...but will dabble in it once i'm done with my current story...
Balaji, that was very good :D
Good one Balaji. But I guess even the MIL watches Metti Oli.
ram, yeah defly an art in itself. looking fwd to you dabbling in it.
kal, thanx!
af, thanx! and in real life both d-i-l and m-i-l probably watch metti oli. but in my reel life only d-i-l watches :-)
nice one! :)
gayathri, thanx for visiting... and thanx :)
anon, that was very touching... but why post something so good anonymously?!
anon, that was poignant....
anon, ram's and my comments should've made it clear that that wouldn't been our response at all! its only your writing that would've been praised :)
and being chauvinistic wasn't the intention of my story either. the recent post on tamil serials just led to it...
Good one. Though it took me a couple of reads to 'get it'. Nothing to do with your clarity. It's not my time of the day :)
Flash, not in the pan, I hope.
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